Pretty Crazy

This definitely has potential- but it needs a lot of work punctuation-wise. There are so many easy ways to tell where to start a new paragraph. I'll make a boring ...

Wow, I rarely read poetry but that was amazing! The imagery and rhyming were great. I could actually see the wild horses of the sea rearing up and spraying water ...

Really, really good! I love the eyes! :P

Gorsh it's been a long time since I've posted a drawing. I actually drew this a while ago, but anyway, here's one of my dragons: Morengo Portrait.jpg

That's cool. :shock: I would never have the patience to do that. Good job!

Would you rather watch the wiggles all day or watch dora the explorer all day. Believe it or not, Dora. yeah . . . :| Would you rather be stepped ...

Banned because I can't think of a reason to ban you. >.

Wow, why didn't anyone else think of writing a story about this site? I enjoyed it very much. *stars* :smt003

Sorry to say I didn't read the whole thing. It was way too long for my short attention span. Please break up the chapters into different topics. You get a ...

Wow it's been a while. I remembered this story and always will. But I was sure surprised to see a new chapter. Better late than never. You introduced a new ...

Okay I finally found a time to read this and get interested in this part. I wish I had read it earlier! This is very good. It's a nice change ...

Just start at what you know is going to happen. You could write a prologue that gets your readers into the story and then start writing what happens next or ...

I've only heard fireflies. I love the different music in it.

I wish they would make a sequel. That would be awesome! :elephant: :elephant: :elephant: :elephant: :elephant: :elephant:

The day goes on like any other. It’s funny how you think someone will notice something, but they don’t. I thought for sure someone would suddenly stop and say: “Hello ...